PROJECT SUMMARY
I had to make a project trying to figure out how to make a sustainable business on cemeteries and funeral homes in Florida. I was able to make this project by researching for many hours and really deeply giving 100% of me and got a great grade on it.
WHY?
I made this project for 2 reasons. One reason is because it was made for a 100 point project that counted in 4 classes. The other reason is because I wanted to learn more about cemeteries and funeral homes and have fun researching.
HOW?
I made this project in 3 ways. I made it in a google doc. From that google doc, I made it into a google slide. In the google slide I included many photos that I searched on google and a video I made using a video recorder on Minecraft.
WHAT?
I found out many things. Some things I found out was that there are many ways of dealing with bodies. You can cremate them, you could bury them, or you could donate it to science. I also found out that cremation in Florida and the United States went up by 203% since 30 years ago.
SO WHAT?
This result is really important. The reason is because people will stop burying others if cremation keeps growing, and it will also mean that there will be more money for funeral homes since cremation costs a lot and gives you so much profit.
WHAT'S NEXT?
I could've added more information on how cremation works. I could've also included the history of burial and cremation.
JUDGES FEEDBACK
The integration of several different elements is interesting. You have clearly thought about many different aspects and how they could come together. I think it would be good to set up some more background and context for your readers.